Strings of choppy prepositional phrases often cripple student writing—especially when those phrases attempt to compensate for a weak verb, a tactic akin to filling up your radiator as a remedy for running out of gas.
Consider this defilement of my first sentence:
A common type of failing in writing by students of all ages is the distracting use of prepositional phrases in the sentences of their essays.
The point, of course, isn’t to eliminate prepositional phrases—which are useful and expressive--but to employ them in ways that engage readers rather than distract them. To that end, teachers of my generation often demanded that we circle every preposition and to be verb in our essays. If the paper was full of circles, we had some revising to do.
The problem with that approach? Most of us didn’t know what to circle because we had never memorized a list of prepositions. We had revising to do. But we didn’t know how to do it.
The free Writing Reviser Google Doc Add-on eliminates that obstacle. By simply selecting a menu item, students immediately see every prepositional phrase in their essay, and they are prompted with information about when those phrases can be problematic. Precise revision thus replaces guesswork—as students tune their ears and begin asking the kinds of questions experienced writers ask automatically.
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Looking for student resources on prepositional phrases (and a laugh or two), watch our animated video on needless phrases and check out the following: